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简答题】 下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在古徵公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。
注意:
①短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整;
②短文单词数:100左右(已给句子中的单词不计入总词数);
③参考词汇:货摊stand (n.) ; 抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)
内容要点
1.公园,冰淇淋货摊旁
2.年轻妇女的包被抢
3.人们追赶抢包者
4.长排椅上坐着一位老人
5.抢包者从老人身旁跑过,老人用伞将他绊倒
6.两名警察逮捕抢劫者
7.妇女感谢老人,人们称赞老人的机智
One Sunday morning, there were some people in Gu Zheng Park.
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解析: One possible version:
One Sunday morning, there were some people in Gu Zheng Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. She shouted: “Stop thief! He’s snatched my bag! ”Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatcher’s legs. The young man fell down on the ground hard. Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.
评分标准如下:
◇第一档:(20-17分)
能适当使用并列句、复合句或典型句型并能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言基本无误;过渡自然、行文连贯,表达清楚;书写规范工整。
◇第二档:(16-14分)
有个别并列句、复合句或典型句型并能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言基本无误;过渡基本自然、行文基本连贯,表达清楚达意;书写规范工整。
◇第三档:(13-12分)
整篇文章不使用并列句、复合句或典型句型,全部使用了简单句。有一些语法错误但尚能达意。能写明全部或绝大部分要点;过渡基本自然、行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚;书写基本规范工整。
◇第四档:(11-6分)
能写出部分要点;语言有较多错误;表达欠完整,但多数句子尚能达意;全文至少有2-3个句子可读。
◇第五档。(5-0分)
行文表达不清楚。只写出个别单词、词组或短语;只有一个句子可读。
注意:
1.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言表达初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
2.词数少于60或多于120的,从总分中减去1分,未写或全文抄袭的不给分。
3.考虑拼写及标点符号的准确性;英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。