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简答题】
【2012陕西澄城期末】请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号【∧】,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线【\】划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者【从第11处起】不计分。
Nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health, but how to keep health? First,
it is necessary to take any exercise every day.Research shows that get plenty of exercise makes
the heart beat fast and the lungs work harder.Second, eat more fruits, vegetable and less meat.
Third, getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthy.
Smoking and alcohol drinking injures one’s health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.
If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they’ll great improve their health.
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解析:
第一句中的concerning改为concerned,考察词组be concerned about sb./sth.关心、挂念某人/某事;health改为healthy,因为keep为连系动词,后面要跟形容词。
第二句中any改为some,any一般用于疑问句或否定句中,在肯定句中意为“任何”。
第三句中get改为getting,在句中作宾语从句的主语;fast改为faster,与harder保持一致。
第四句中改为vegetables,这是可数名词
第五句中as改为like,as作介词用意为“作为,当……时候”,like作介词用意为“像,比如,诸如……之类”;important前加an,因为way是可数名词。
第六句中injures改为injure,smoking and alcohol drinking为并列主语,动词要用复数。
第七句中great改为greatly,修饰动词improve要使用副词。
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【2012杭州十四中期中】请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号【∧】,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线【\】划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者【从第11处起】不计分。
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.
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解析:
while—when us—him so-but has-had checked-check call in 去掉use-using little前加a that—what really-real
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简答题】
云南省部分名校高2012届第一次统一考试【玉溪一中、昆明三中、楚雄一中】请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号【∧】,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线【\】划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者【从第11处起】不计分。
Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don’t have enough times to do that I’m interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. It’s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how I’m feeling. Besides, I’m also interested in a fashion and I’m always searching something special that can reflect my personality.
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解析:
1. was spent--- is 2. enough times --- time 3. do that --- what 4. thing which --- that 5. spare minute --- minutes 6. their study --- my 7. like go --- going 8. express exact --- exactly 9. in a fashion 10. searching∧something --- for
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简答题】
请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号【∧】,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线【\】划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者【从第11处起】不计分。
The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.
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解析:
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【2012苍南中学期中】请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号【∧】,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线【\】划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者【从第11处起】不计分。
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
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解析: