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Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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解析: Dear_Editor,
I’m_writing_to_tell_you_about_the_discussion_we’ve_had_about_whether_passengers_who_ride_in_a_car_driven_by_a_drunken_driver_should_be_punished.
The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety.Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for the driver and other people on the road.
The majority of the students,however,disapprove of the idea,stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not.What’s more,even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive,it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice.
As far as I am concerned,punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but also hard to carry out.
Yours_sincerely,
Li_Hua
解析: I’m sorry to hear that you are not getting on well with your mother and that you are considering running away from home after you quarreled with her.But you haven’t made up your mind to leave.
Most teenagers do not like to be restricted and treated like children.But there are many dangers involved in running away.Alone in a strange city or on the street,a teen is an easy target for thieves and other criminals.
In my eyes,trust and communication are of great importance.Why don’t you try to break the ice by talking to your mother about your emotions?
Secondly,know how to calm yourself down after you’re upset.Maybe you need to run around outside,listening to music,or drawing.Do whatever safe things you need to do to feel better.
You can also get some help from trusted adults—someone like your teacher,or neighbor who you can depend on to support and help you.